Talk:Wyatt

Approval notes

Approved with the following changes.

From special abilities & skills:

• Removed lying, persuading, and flirting. Not really... applicable here. If he tries to lie or flirt a lot, it can just be mentioned in the section about his personality.
• Removed running. This is covered under the Agility stars below.
• Removed acrobatics. Covered under agility stars. No need for repetition.

From ability ratings:

• Removed "leap up to five times his height" in agility because that's considered "normal" here; no need to mention.
• Corrected agility stars to 4. Here's what I counted from the description: +3 for 125MPH top speed, +1 for acrobatic, +0.5 for climbing, +0.5 for normal quickness (since it wasn't mentioned), -1 for bad braking. Total: 4.
• Not a requirement, but I advise that you make it so he can stop without sliding an entire football field, or you're going to have... problems... Keeping the braking anti-star is fine, just, maybe you shouldn't specify an exact distance or say it's so extreme for your own sake. But this is up to you.
• Removed bit about his "larger than average" build from toughness because it doesn't agree with what you chose for strength, and, at 102 cm, he's on the short-to-average side.
• He can't have superpowers and have little-to-no chaos energy. All supernatural powers in this RP are derived from it, and it serves as an indicator of a character's vitality, too, so this would also imply that he is somehow deficient or maybe even unwell (or, uh, dead and in the grave, if he has none). Also leaves out his ability to hurl projectile blasts, which is core to his character. Taking the liberty of adjusting all of this for you and boosting his rating accordingly.

From ability info: Everything's a-okay, though I'm taking one more liberty in adjusting something for you, in your best interest: the coma thing. If your character goes into a coma every time he wears himself out, and doesn't recover from his own vitality, chances are he'll... never recover. Would prefer that not to happen.

He's ready to go. That being said, I still haven't seen you around the chat... It might be difficult to get involved if you're chat-shy. Just a heads-up. Later, and good luck!

-Admin 20:04, 3 June 2012 (EDT)