Talk:Scout
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Review thing
About the stars:
- Agility star rating doesn't explain which stars she has. We don't know her max speed or anything else about why she has 2 stars. Just make sure to figure out which items you picked from the list and make the description indicate them in some way.
- Strength doesn't mention her build, but I'm guessing that it'd be in the "heavy" zone due to the tail thing and her (appropriately) hefty weight. That'd be 3 stars for build, and 5 for strength?
- That said, the strength rating is concerned with lifting strength, mostly with arms, and not just "how much I can walk around with once someone else has lifted things onto me." It isn't that you aren't welcome to have a very strong character, but instead just that everything about this one's description sounds like she doesn't really qualify, and that she's simply accustomed to having extra weight on her. Meanwhile the 5-star strength option thing implies the kind of brutish, raw-musclez character who can squat-lift a car by the bumper to flip it over like an angry Japanese man at a tea table. Would recommend lowering this rating to an overall total of 6 stars.
- Looking at toughness stars, it looks right since her build is probably the 3-star build (as said before), but it almost seems like you're suggesting the tail for the "invulnerable point" 2-star thing. If that's the case, we should probably bump this up to 5. (Seeing much potential for some tail-shield action here.)
Anyway, that's pretty much all I've got. The rest of the profile looks fine to me!
-Psikeout 23:38, 29 August 2012 (EDT)
