Talk:Nix
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- Star ratings all seem spot on. Good work. I'm removing the blurb about his chaos energy since it's at an average level, but we appreciate you remembering that it's there and including it in the count. Most forget.
- "the fox is almost alarmingly willing to throw himself headfirst into any number of sticky situations, a tendency juxtaposed by a resourceful and observant nature such antics might belie" is a sticky, passively-phrased word-tangle, but I'm not sure how to repair it and maintain your meaning. Maybe you could give this bit a little TLC later just so it makes more sense.
- Just so you know, the energy ability described in his profile ("chaotic power layering his hits every once in a while to give them an extra kick") is a pretty standard ability that a large majority of the character cast is capable of executing. No problems here, but just don't be surprised if you see others doing it on command, and easily, even if no particular attention is drawn to it in their profile. Chaos energy smacks are just a fact of Sonic character life in this RP, for those so inclined.
Well done. Stamped, approved, go for it.
-Admin 19:58, 10 September 2012 (EDT)
