Talk:Leon the Lion
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Things to address:
There isn't much. I know this list looks like a lot, but that's just because I popped in some examples of something that I hope might be helpful. In reality, there isn't anything wrong here—just a couple words to take out, one thing to add, and some word use confusion. So, rock on, and let one of us know when you're done, or if you need any help.
- Ability info / unique ability
- There is no explanation of the "Berserk Mode Ability" thing anywhere in the character profile. There's just an extra set of star ratings hanging off there. You'll wanna mention what that's all about somewhere.
- Special Abilities
- "Strong" is already covered by the ability ratings section
- "High stamina" is already covered by the ability ratings section
- If you don't mind, please yank the "Like all cats" part off.
- [In case you're wondering about the reason: We don't generalize species' abilities. There is nothing that can be said that applies to "all cats" or all members of any species in a Sonic RP. This is the place where the main cat is known for being big and slow, the main hedgehog is known for being fast (not a real hedgehog trait), the echidna is known for gliding and climbing (not echidna traits), and the fox is known for flying (definitely not a fox trait).]
- Spelling
- While we don't nitpick actual RP posts very much, we do try to get character profiles spot-on (since they kind of represent our RP and standards to the outside world), so, just give a quick check for spelling. Homophones are the things to beware of. For example:
- Steal vs. steel (one is the act of theft, one is metal)
- Do vs. due ("Do you want to go?" vs. "I won't be going due to illness")
- Wondering vs. wandering (to wonder is to think, to wander is to travel)
- Since vs. sense vs. seance ("since" relates to time, "sense" relates to the senses or sensibility, and "seance" is the usage of occult powers to summon on the spirits of the dead [I'm not kidding]),
- Then vs. than ("I will go to the store, then to work," vs. "I would rather fly than drive all the way to California")
- While we don't nitpick actual RP posts very much, we do try to get character profiles spot-on (since they kind of represent our RP and standards to the outside world), so, just give a quick check for spelling. Homophones are the things to beware of. For example:
-Admin 19:36, 18 April 2011 (EDT)
