Talk:Animus
Admintastical changes
Not much to do here. And you did just fine with the formatting! Zero problems with it. Anyway, here's what was changed:
- Removed line about strength and durability in special abilities because strength is already well covered under the strength section, and durability under toughness.
- The "Chaos drive core" thing is fine, but it can't be listed as a "unique" ability here. Those are actually extremely common with robotic characters in our story (most all GUN robots, plus a type of robot unique to our story called Capsule Troopers). Also, there's already an organic, living character who secretly has a chaos drive inside it. So, while your character can have it, we just can't make it unique only to your character.
- Toughness rating looks like it's off just a halfstar, so I added one to it. Here's why, based off of what I count from your description:
- Reinforced skeleton (+0.5), high pain tolerance (+0.5), high pain threshold (+0.5), normal, fit, healthy build (+1.0), weakness (I'm assuming you must have chosen -1.0 for severity). I'm not counting "robotic" against her because she really isn't a robot--she's still a living thing. Thus, the total: 1.5.
- (And don't worry about the 12-star thing. Half a point over the limit in an interwebz Sonic game is not going to be a big deal here.)
Let us know if you are cool with these adjustments. If so, we'll go ahead and give it the big, fat approved stamp, and you'll be free to go find some way to entangle yourself in the story. (Given the styling of the character, I'd probably recommend investigating the current outer space story arc. I'm sure we can find some way to get her out there...)
Oh, one last thing I think should note simply to make sure we've got the same perspective here: You are making your (comparatively) small, light character stronger than these two guys. You're for all intents and purposes approved and don't have to change anything at this point, but I'm just making sure you realize where 5 stars puts her in the standings.
And with that, we're done.
