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Updates Sonic Spindash RP is closed.Founded 05/25/2002 by three friends; ended 09/19/2012.
It pains me to say this, but we're done. Thank you to those who have participated and followed along these many years. We had a lot of fun, and your contributions will be remembered for a long time to come.
Strangers and visitors of the future, please respect what is ours. If there is anything in the form of writing or rules you'd like to borrow for your own RP, please e-mail me on the gmail account "onsoku" for permission. Chances are I'll grant it if you are a nice, intelligent person, and agree to just a few small stipulations regarding proper crediting method. But please, leave our characters alone.All fan-made, original, non-SEGA characters, character art, and concepts remain property of their respective creators. Please show respect and don't try to take any of them for your own use.
I hope that some of us will be able to move on and have some more fun writing hobbies in the future. No matter what, we'll stay in touch, and this group will live on, even if it has nothing to do with RP.
I love you guys. God bless.
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Post subject: My New Character - Andre  Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 1:24 am |
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What is your character's name? > Andre Markusu Chameleon Species? > Chameleon Age? > 14 Give us a couple paragraphs of general info about your character. For example, what's the character's personality like? What kind of things does he or she do? Why does he or she do it? (Please don't give us your character's point-by-point life history, though.) > Andre is friendly, understanding, responsible, and has strong dedication to whatever needs to be done. Keeping to his pacifistic ways as an individual, he does not think violence is the answer to anyone's problems and has gentle and kind heart. In times of tension, he relies on the option of discussing with feuding sides to prevent a worse case scenario. Whenever he is responsible, he readily admits guilt, and can sometimes be harsh on himself. As a whole, he is social with anyone despite the fact that he feels insecure around girls that have a crush on him. On the flipside, whenever he feels stressed or frustrated, he tries to take a moment to calm himself before continuing what he is doing to avoid nervousness and trouble. His tolerance and endurance is enough to handle with his co-workers, problems of angry customers and as well as tackling down out-of-store shoplifters with stolen items without much of a problem. Before work and at the end of a stressful day, he make sures that takes the time to clean himself up before he goes out or unwind for the evening. By being well organized, he follows a scheduled procedure everyday as far as balancing out work and play. As far as hobbies and interests goes, Andre enjoys exercise, cooking, reading, meditation, listening to calm music, playing with his hackey sack, practicing his Tai-Chi, going out to town, writing, talking with his co-workers and family, and even playing on his acoustic guitar. In terms of exercise & fighting skills, he either goes to the local gym or up to Holly Mountain as a place to keep sharp. Much to this, he is grateful for what he has and hopes to continue to make his family proud of him. Does your character have any skills or special abilities, a gimmick, or anything that makes it stand out as an athlete or fighter? If so, talk a little about it here. Be sure to include an explanation or origin story for anything unusual, extraordinary, or supernatural. > With general education done recently, this didn't excuse him from extensive martial arts training he has been undergoing since childhood that is taught by his father and grandmother. He underwent a steady and stable pace to learn his lessons in Kung-Fu, Tai-Chi, bojutsu (with a staff), and Judo in terms of fighting skills. Additionally, he has been trained in using Kyusho-jitsu as a way to non-lethally temporarily paralyze and later seize opponents by striking at pressure point(s). At young age, according to a strange individual he met near the village, he was told that he is believed to be gifted with the use of Chaos Energy. After discovery, he went on with experimenting his newfound 'ability'. Unfortunely, Andre suffered difficulty on terms of control and once his father found out, he forbid future use until Andre met someone experienced. Does your character have any purpose? (It's okay if you don't have this fully figured out yet, but all the better if your character does have an agenda or some sort of driving force to it to make it interact with other characters.) > Being peer-pressured by his friend to move on with his life caused Andre to get into trouble with his family before he made final adjustments to leave when he is old enough to. His parents took it well enough and stated if he is caught into some trouble, he is welcomed to return home to Chun-Nan. On his arrival in Central City, Andre lives out his life to the best he can to survive in the world. He's been successful with obtaining a part-time job at a music store and an apartment as he tries to avoid financial binds. It is still undetermined if he could have plans to find another job, go back to school, or do something else in his spare time since he doesn't have many friends (with the exception of some co-workers). Does your character have an image? You can post it here, if so (as long as you follow the rules mentioned in the character guidelines). If not, please write a description of your character's appearance. >  Will you be around to play your character regularly? (i.e. Keeping daily tabs on any threads you involve yourself in, and posting whenever it's your turn?) > I will make sure on keeping tabs with threads I am involved with, including RPs. Do you live in or near the Americas, or elsewhere? (It may be difficult for you to participate in any of the fast-moving sessions if you're only online when the rest of the group is asleep, so we ask this just to be aware of any potential problems.) > Yes. I live in North America around Eastern Timezone. Are you okay with having your character information and image on this website (such as on the wiki)? > Sure, it's not such a big situation. I don't mind!
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Post subject: Re: New Character  Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 6:27 pm |
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Your signature wrote: CAUTION:Femalewith Mental Disability Just because I have issues with my writing doesn't mean I'm a foreigner. Are you really going to wave a flag around for special treatment? Where is your dignity? Look, we aren't a part of the government, nor are we a business. There aren't any special programs or accommodations for people with mental conditions here. We're just a group of people. Just people, not wearing labels. I dare say that conditions like this are nearly commonplace, and that probably half the group membership has something they tussle with, but no one ever joined by flouting their problems with bold, highlighted notices, as if to look for pity. This is just supposed to be a place to enjoy writing a story with others and make friends, and it's going to be very awkward if you can't write clearly and your idea of introducing yourself to would-be "friends" is by all but directly asking for special treatment. As for the profile? Yes, speaking in terms of writing clarity and how well it can be understood, this is better than last time. However, to be making so many edits, it still seems like you aren't taking the time to voice out your sentences and speak naturally. We can throw a blind dart at any part of your info and come up with an awkward example: Quote: Before work and at the end of a stressful day, he make sures that takes the time to clean himself up before he goes out or unwind for the evening. Is it unacceptable? I don't know. To be honest, we didn't fully review this after seeing that signature just because of how awkward the situation became. Just know that you will need to be able to write clearly, every post, every time, without need for constant revisions, in order to join this RP. I don't know what challenges you face, but it's not our business, nor our responsibility to have to deal with them for you. Frankly... I think you degrade yourself with that signature. PS: We don't want to see any drama about this. Keep it out of the chat this time.
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Post subject: Re: My New Character - Andre  Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 6:33 pm |
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Sorry about that, I'll edit that out, get rid of the signature and try to shut my mouth. What is your character's name? > Andre Markusu Chameleon Species? > Chameleon Age? > 14 Give us a couple paragraphs of general info about your character. For example, what's the character's personality like? What kind of things does he or she do? Why does he or she do it? (Please don't give us your character's point-by-point life history, though.) > Andre is friendly, understanding, responsible, and has strong dedication to whatever needs to be done. Keeping to his pacifistic ways as an individual, he does not think violence is the answer to anyone's problems and has gentle and kind heart. In times of tension, he relies on the option of discussing with feuding sides to prevent a worse case scenario. Whenever he is responsible, he readily admits guilt, and can sometimes be harsh on himself. As a whole, he is social with anyone despite the fact that he feels insecure around girls that have a crush on him. On the flipside, whenever he feels stressed or frustrated, he tries to take a moment to calm himself before continuing what he is doing to avoid nervousness and trouble. His tolerance and endurance is enough to handle with his co-workers, problems of angry customers and as well as tackling down out-of-store shoplifters with stolen items without much of a problem. By being well organized, he follows a scheduled procedure everyday as far as balancing out work and play. As far as hobbies and interests goes, Andre enjoys exercise, cooking, reading, meditation, listening to calm music, playing with his hackey sack, practicing his Tai-Chi, going out to town, writing, talking with his co-workers and family, and even playing on his acoustic guitar. Sometimes, he goes to the local gym or travels to Holly Mountain to hone his fighting skills. Much to this, he is grateful for what he has and hopes to continue to make his family proud of him. Does your character have any skills or special abilities, a gimmick, or anything that makes it stand out as an athlete or fighter? If so, talk a little about it here. Be sure to include an explanation or origin story for anything unusual, extraordinary, or supernatural. > With general education done recently, this didn't excuse him from extensive martial arts training he has been undergoing since childhood that is taught by his father and grandmother. He underwent a steady and stable pace to learn his lessons in Kung-Fu, Tai-Chi, bojutsu (with a staff), and Judo in terms of fighting skills. Additionally, he has been trained in using Kyusho-jitsu as a way to non-lethally temporarily paralyze and later seize opponents by striking at pressure point(s). At young age, according to a strange individual he met near the village, he was told that he is believed to be gifted with the use of Chaos Energy. After discovery, he went on with experimenting his newfound 'ability'. Unfortunely, Andre suffered difficulty on terms of control and once his father found out, he forbid future use until Andre met someone experienced. Does your character have any purpose? (It's okay if you don't have this fully figured out yet, but all the better if your character does have an agenda or some sort of driving force to it to make it interact with other characters.) > By being peer-pressured by his friend to move on with his life, it caused Andre to get into trouble with his family before he made final adjustments to leave when he is old enough. Angered at first, his parents forbid Andre to leave, yet after consideration, they learned the facts before taking it well enough and agreed. In their final statement, if Andre is caught into some trouble, he is welcomed to return home in Chun-Nan. On his arrival in Central City, Andre lives out his life to the best he can to survive in the world. He's been successful with obtaining a part-time job at a music store and an apartment as he tries to avoid financial binds. It is still undetermined if he could have plans to find another job, go back to school, or do something else in his spare time since he doesn't have many friends (with the exception of some co-workers). Does your character have an image? You can post it here, if so (as long as you follow the rules mentioned in the character guidelines). If not, please write a description of your character's appearance.  Will you be around to play your character regularly? (i.e. Keeping daily tabs on any threads you involve yourself in, and posting whenever it's your turn?) > I will make sure on keeping tabs with threads I am involved with, including RPs. Do you live in or near the Americas, or elsewhere? (It may be difficult for you to participate in any of the fast-moving sessions if you're only online when the rest of the group is asleep, so we ask this just to be aware of any potential problems.) > Yes. I live in North America around Eastern Timezone. Are you okay with having your character information and image on this website (such as on the wiki)? > Sure, it's not such a big situation. I don't mind!
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Post subject: Re: My New Character - Andre  Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:05 pm |
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Going over this awkward writing thing has become an effort in futility. It improves only marginally every time you hastily resubmit, yet you have the ability to write normally in the chat. So, here's the solution: You've been marked as a Beginner Member. This means your character profile hasn't quite been accepted and won't be placed on the wiki, but you will be able to play your character here as long as you are okay with the restrictions in the box below (which were simply copied from the how-to-join thread). In this way, we will get to see if your writing issue is purely one related to character profiles. If it turns out you can RP just fine, then hey, we'll work around the profile thing and figure something out. The RPing part is the important one. So, again, if you accept the above, welcome in. Take a shot, see how it goes.
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Post subject: Re: My New Character - Andre  Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 3:55 am |
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About the Chaos Powers part, I'm having a bit of an issue with how he gets it and I may need some help on that. What is your character's name? > Andre Markusu Chameleon Species? > Chameleon Age? > 14 Give us a couple paragraphs of general info about your character. For example, what's the character's personality like? What kind of things does he or she do? Why does he or she do it? (Please don't give us your character's point-by-point life history, though.) > Andre is friendly, gentle, understanding, responsible, and has a strong dedication to whatever needs to be done. Keeping to his pacifistic ways, he does not think violence is the answer to anyone's problems and relies on discussing with feuding sides. Whenever he makes a mess out of things, he readily admits guilt, and can sometimes be harsh on himself. Socially, he discusses openly with anyone though he gets insecure around girls with a crush on him. When stressed or frustrated, he tries to calm down before continuing to avoid nervousness and trouble. His solid tolerance and endurance is enough to handle with issues of work and at home, making it difficult to even annoy him. Well organized and studious, he plans and follows a scheduled procedure as far as balancing out work and play. With hobbies and interests goes, Andre enjoys exercise, cooking, reading, meditation, listening to calm music, playing with his hackey sack, practicing his Tai-Chi, going out to town, writing, talking with his co-workers and family, and even playing on his acoustic guitar. Sometimes, he goes to the local gym and sometimes travels to somewhere peaceful to hone his fighting skills. Does your character have any skills or special abilities, a gimmick, or anything that makes it stand out as an athlete or fighter? If so, talk a little about it here. Be sure to include an explanation or origin story for anything unusual, extraordinary, or supernatural. > With general education finished, he had martial arts training that he underwent since young age. Taught by his father and grandmother, he learned Kung-Fu, Tai-Chi, Judo, bojutsu, and Kyusho-jitsu. Does your character have any purpose? (It's okay if you don't have this fully figured out yet, but all the better if your character does have an agenda or some sort of driving force to it to make it interact with other characters.) > Being peer-pressured by his friend to move out on his own, it caused Andre to get into trouble with his family before he made final adjustments to leave when he is old enough. At first suggestion, he was forbidden to leave home but after some persuasion, they considered letting Andre depart as he was encouraged to return home for visitation. On arrival in Central City, Andre begins new start to survive the world. He has been successful with obtaining a part-time job at a music store and an apartment as he tries to avoid financial binds. To this day, it is undetermined if he could have plans to find another job, go back to school or something else in his spare time since he doesn't have many friends (with the exception of some co-workers). Does your character have an image? You can post it here, if so (as long as you follow the rules mentioned in the character guidelines). If not, please write a description of your character's appearance.  Will you be around to play your character regularly? (i.e. Keeping daily tabs on any threads you involve yourself in, and posting whenever it's your turn?) > I will make sure on keeping tabs with threads I am involved with, including RPs. Do you live in or near the Americas, or elsewhere? (It may be difficult for you to participate in any of the fast-moving sessions if you're only online when the rest of the group is asleep, so we ask this just to be aware of any potential problems.) > Yes. I live in North America around Eastern Timezone. Are you okay with having your character information and image on this website (such as on the wiki)? > Sure, it's not such a big situation. I don't mind!
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Post subject: Re: My New Character - Andre  Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:44 am |
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You've already been accepted into the beginner member group and can post in the RP as soon as you feel an opportunity arises. Please hold off on requesting any more reviews of character info until you've shown how you handle yourself in actual RP. The question now is not if you can eventually piece together a readable character profile after enough tries, but instead whether or not you can post clearly and readably in RP without needing tons of revisions.
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Post subject: Re: My New Character - Andre  Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2012 5:38 pm |
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So, some of your complaining was mentioned. Quote: ZFZX: A friend of mine's says that getting into a SonicRP shouldn't involve a complexing process. ZFZX: Here, I feel like I'm getting looks because I'm not as equal to high school writing level. ZFZX: 10 years and not many people had came around here. ZFZX: I wonder if I'm trying too hard to just fit in around here. ZFZX: I know I really like to be RPing as a full member. 1. Go to another Sonic RP with your friend, then. You're the one who came back here after the exact same thing happened the last time you tried to join. If you can't write, literate RPing may not be a good fit for you. There are a million other RPs on the internet where you can join in a dissonant chorus of malformed sentences and raped word usage with Devilstorm the Hedgechidna and Friends. 2. That's right. You are getting looks because you are making a scene. Most everyone here can write at a college level, but even still, perfection is not necessary. Not to insult or embarrass anyone here, but, there genuinely are members here whose writing is a little rough around the edges. That's okay, though! The fact of the matter is that it's clear what they're trying to say, even if they misspell words or misuse punctuation. You write like English is a second language to you, however, and it has taken you innumerable revisions to get something even remotely junior-high level. Again, if you don't like our standards and the way we want to do things, why are you here? 3. We have not spent all 10 years on this one website. We operated for several years in chat-based RP then moved to toroimerai.net (now defunct), then mizurahi.net (defunct), ssrp.spindash.net, then scc.spindash.net, and now sonic.spindash.net. What you see here is from the past two years of our existence alone. See here for our complete history. Do you think trying to belittle us is cute or effective? 4. Trying hard to fit in? It looks like you're trying to stick out as sorely as you can. You gripe and bemoan your situation while refusing to read or understand rules, and you continuously resubmit your character information rather than take a moment to do it right, just like the last time you came here. Some of your more recent questions about "starting RPs" here reveal that you never even read the front page of the website before firing yet another application at us. 5. If you want to RP as a full member, then prove you can write by participating as a beginner member first. You're not getting anywhere any other way. The fact that we're even offering this opportunity is a nicety on our part that we are not obligated to extend. Quote: [14:05] <ZFZX> Back, sorry I was preventing myself from bursting out with anger. [14:06] <Muffin> er [14:06] <Muffin> Why be angry? [14:07] <ZFZX> I'm getting tired of people just blocking out my opportune timing, [14:08] <Muffin> Well to be honest, have you talked to Matt yet? [14:08] <ZFZX> Yeah. [14:09] <Mechanization_> It's still early in the chapter, I doubt they'll be many new popings right away to be honest [14:09] <ZFZX> But daggoneit Matt, timeskip to where the group is out of the house. [14:09] <ZFZX> and heading towards someplace sooner. [14:09] <Muffin> Dude, its a sonic rp but I mean heck they just met two new people and fell out of space [14:10] <ZFZX> I'm not a dude. [14:10] <ZFZX> Do not address me as DUDE. [14:10] <ZFZX> I'm a girl. [14:11] <Muffin> I am very sorry. I address everyone that way and did not mean to be offensive [14:11] <ZFZX> It's fine. [14:12] <ZFZX> It's just.. I wish they can hurry up and get out of the house sooner. I do not control when other members post. I also don't interrupt and forcibly advance scenes just because a complainer is jumping up and down and pitching fits on the sidelines. We skip once there's nothing left to do in a scene, or once the majority feel they are done posting in it. Let's make something clear, here. You have come to this RP, made an embarrassing scene about your purported Asperger's syndrome to try to get special treatment; complained passive-aggressively (as well as just-plain-aggressively) about people mistaking your gender when you have refused to share a first name; failed to submit a usable or even fully readable character profile (when someone else easily got in on the first whack just days prior, so don't pin it on us); and now you've started getting uppity. So, here, I'll save you the time of finding some other RPs to try. Google is a good friend. • http://sonic-cyclone.net• http://mobiusrp.com• http://sthrpgs.proboards.comAll active and living, all with their own sites. Now, I am done dealing with this. I run this place to have fun, and it's people like you that have all the capacity to make it un-fun for me. Zip it, take your best shot at participating, and prove that you're able to be here, or go to another RP. This group does not bend to your beck and call; it never will. There will be times when you have to wait, and times when you are expected to post. It comes and goes. There is no longer an in-between option for your behavior. Straighten up or ship out. Your very next wayward peep is a ticket to permanent IP banning.
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