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The Questionnaire!
(Please note that this is not a complete character profile—that comes later. This is more of an abbreviated "character concept" sheet. Get the basic premise for the character approved, then you can move on to building a full wiki profile. This is so people don't waste time on long profiles only to get rejected for some fundamental rule they missed.)

What is your character's name?
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Freajora

Species?
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hedgehog/cat
Age?
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24
Give us a couple paragraphs of general info about your character. For example, what's the character's personality like? What kind of things does he or she do? Why does he or she do it? (Please don't give us your character's point-by-point life history, though.)
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he's a guy who has trouble growing up, he likes to help people out even when he's got to deny him self something, also a hot head if it cames to treasen, loves climbing can't ceap up with sonic but when it comes to walls he's the first over

Does your character have any skills or special abilities, a gimmick, or anything that makes it stand out as an athlete or fighter? If so, talk a little about it here. Be sure to include an explanation or origin story for anything unusual, extraordinary, or supernatural.
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climbing, just how to get down every time..
Does your character have any purpose? (It's okay if you don't have this fully figured out yet, but all the better if your character does have an agenda or some sort of driving force to it to make it interact with other characters.)
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finding his mother 'n' father.... manic 'n' blaze. he doesn't know yet, tails does....
Does your character have an image? You can post it here, if so (as long as you follow the rules mentioned in the character guidelines). If not, please write a description of your character's appearance.
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shadowish, unleashed ,greenish a little slimmer
Will you be around to play your character regularly? (i.e. Keeping daily tabs on any threads you involve yourself in, and posting whenever it's your turn?)
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don't have smartphone but i'll post dayly
Do you live in or near the Americas, or elsewhere? (It may be difficult for you to participate in any of the fast-moving sessions if you're only online when the rest of the group is asleep, so we ask this just to be aware of any potential problems.)
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Europa, i have weird time shedules, i work night shifts
Are you okay with having your character information and image on this website (such as on the wiki)?
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yeah, sure, just about the part that manic and blaze are my parents..? i dunno i am not suposed to know
What is your name? (This question isn't optional. We need something to call you by that isn't your character's name. Don't post your last name, though! This forum isn't private.)
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Erwin


Lastly, by submitting the above, you acknowledge your understanding of the following:

1. Even though we want things to be as friendly as possible here, this is a character review process. This involves critique, which is intended to highlight and iron out any possible problems in character profiles. (In other words, it doesn't mean we don't like you or your character if we point out issues, so chill, and don't get too worked up about imaginary cartoon characters on the internet.)

2. This is not a chat RP! This is a forum-based RP, as it says everywhere from the splash page, to the front page, to right under the logo of the page you're viewing now. Chat participation is still largely required to be a communicative and effective member of the community, however.

3. You have at least looked at the rules. You have at least looked at the main page and know that you are signing for an RP, and know what role-playing is. If you are unclear on anything, ask questions before you submit. Please. Please.

All clear? Capiche? Alright. Let's g

From the rules:





You clearly didn't look at the rules. Your character is a half-hedgehog son of official characters, one of which does not even exist in our RP since we have nothing to do with Sonic Underground. Meanwhile, your writing sounds like you're either very young or not a native English speaker. Your entire general info section is one big run-on sentence, and your abilities section amounts to the word "climbing."

We wish you no ill will, but this will not work out. Take care, and best of luck finding an RP.