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| Author: | Maren [ Mon Oct 25, 2010 1:30 am ] |
| Post subject: | Mary the Lamb |
This character has been Approved! This character's wiki page may be viewed here. Everything below this point is just the member's application, and does not reflect the final profile! To see the full list of approved original characters with their completed profiles, please visit the original characters section of the wiki. ---- |
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| Author: | Admin [ Mon Oct 25, 2010 9:17 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mary the Lamb |
As you already know, I always thought a slightly malicious reporter would make a great character. The concept is something I welcome, and I will oh-so-happily encourage you to feel free to make any for-fun articles (or fictional excerpts thereof) you like to spice up the story. The whole thing could add interesting depth to it. But in summary, I like the way you've done everything. But this isn't a space for me to gush about the stuff I like. It's for me to be a critical jerk. SO! First off, she's a spunky... sadomasochist? Perhaps you didn't mean it quite so literally as I'm used to thinking of with that kind of terminology, but that has the potential to be some pretty dark stuff, bordering on squicky, depending on what we're talking about, here. Aaand, the SC5 references could be a little heavy-handed in execution, being that she fights by dancing, carries an energy pistol, wears orange, and works for Channel 5, but that may be a matter of opinion, and how much it's played up. I would probably just say to be cautious with the unrelated things you're incorporating into her identity, being that she's a brand new character, and your first in the story. As it stands now, she's a two-faced pseudo-antagonistic reporter who also happens to be a back-alley-brawler action girl with Sonic-style high-flying acro-gymnastic-breakdance-kung-fu and energy blaster gunslinging. If it's not played up too much, it can be fine. Just remember to leave room for development in some way. You probably won't want to start out trying to push the upper limits of combat. That all said, it's good. I like it. It will add to the story. I'm marking it as accepted, and I will put up a starter wiki page soon. The above is not any list of demands for the character, but maybe consider it when you're polishing off the finishing touches on her in wiki-mode. AND SHAZAAM, IT IS DONE. You've finally joined. Took you dang long enough. |
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| Author: | Admin [ Mon Oct 25, 2010 11:43 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Mary the Lamb |
Wiki page is up. Start editing whenever you please, and let one of us know if there are any problems. http://sonic.spindash.net/wiki/index.ph ... y_the_Lamb |
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