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| Author: | Heart [ Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:30 am ] |
| Post subject: | Avatar the Piranha |
This character has been Approved! This character's wiki page may be viewed here. Everything below this point is just the member's application, and does not reflect the final profile! To see the full list of approved original characters with their completed profiles, please visit the original characters section of the wiki. ---- |
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| Author: | Admin [ Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Avatar the Piranha/Dolphin |
Alrighty! So this looks pretty good for the most part, but there are just a couple very minor things to address: First: Carriage returns aren't needed after every or every other line of information; full paragraph form is preferred, and we can just sort this out Wiki-wise, so... just for future reference. Second: The species doesn't quite sit well with all of us mod-folk-- this hybrid's awkward, is all. If you'd be okay with calling it a straight-up piranha, or even a shark such as you mentioned in the chat, the only other shark player in the roleplay is all cool with it-- we'll set it as 'piranha' on the wiki and you can change that about as you see fit. Third, and this was addressed briefly in the chat: your art is rather disproportionate for Sonic style (she looks to be about six feet tall when compared and scaled with other art!). If need be, it can still be used for reference if linked (but not fully displayed) on the wiki, or, if you obtain more in-scale art at some point, that can be used as well. Now, none of these things are deal-breakers, so if you're okay with all that, you can begin editing the wiki! Avatar Make sure to tell one of the mod team when you're done so we can give it a look-over and stamp it approved! |
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| Author: | Heart [ Sat Jul 14, 2012 7:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Avatar the Piranha/Dolphin |
Awesome! If ya don't like the hybrid, just calling her a pihranna is cool with me. Also, I'll draw another pic of her if ya want. I'll see if I can draw a more .... SA styled girl character. ^.^ |
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| Author: | Admin [ Sun Jul 15, 2012 8:31 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Avatar the Piranha/Dolphin |
Here's the link to the discussion tab on your wiki article with approval notes, which is to say: approved. Have fun. |
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