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Founded 05/25/2002 by three friends; ended 09/19/2012.

It pains me to say this, but we're done. Thank you to those who have participated and followed along these many years. We had a lot of fun, and your contributions will be remembered for a long time to come.

Strangers and visitors of the future, please respect what is ours. If there is anything in the form of writing or rules you'd like to borrow for your own RP, please e-mail me on the gmail account "onsoku" for permission. Chances are I'll grant it if you are a nice, intelligent person, and agree to just a few small stipulations regarding proper crediting method. But please, leave our characters alone.All fan-made, original, non-SEGA characters, character art, and concepts remain property of their respective creators. Please show respect and don't try to take any of them for your own use.

I hope that some of us will be able to move on and have some more fun writing hobbies in the future. No matter what, we'll stay in touch, and this group will live on, even if it has nothing to do with RP.

I love you guys. God bless.

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 Post subject: Avatar the Piranha
PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:30 am 
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What is your character's name?
> Avatar (or Ava (A-va) For short)

Species?
> Piranha/Dolphin Hybrid

Age?
> 19

Give us a couple paragraphs of general info about your character. For example, what's the character's personality like? What kind of things does he or she do? Why does he or she do it? (Please don't give us your character's point-by-point life history, though.)
> Avatar is a very people oriented person. She rather be in large groups rather then alone. There's only one problem, though. Avatar tends to talk about gruesome things, she doesn't really mean to sounds scary or evil, but she takes quite an interest in the darker parts of the psyche. Though she's not dark herself, she sometimes acts that way to get a better understanding of them - and she's a pretty good actor.
Avatar is a writer, which is why she indulges herself in the 'dark' character. She figures that the best way to write a character, is to be the character. She's a real method actor, except it's for writing.
While she's trying to be 'dark' she tends to take on the traits of gangs she has witnessed while in Westside. Heck, she probably wouldn't even mind taking on a 'job' or even helping out one of the gangs on a job. She really has a twisted way of approaching things.
Though, even if she's 'in character' if you ask her about her writing, she'll instantly come 'out of character' to talk to you about it. Her true personality is rather down-to-earth. She tends to be straight and to-the point, but is very pleasant to talk to. When talking about her writing, she's enthusiastic, and always willing to accept critiques. The problem is, she's in-character so often, that not many people know she's a writer, and her 'in-character' personality is how she is normally. If someone does find out however, she will happily tell them all about her tactics and what she's really attempting when acting that way.
Avatar is also a daredevil of sorts, she loves dangerous situations (she has to, when she does what she does) and also loves to put herself in those situations. Where ever danger is, she'll go to it.

Does your character have any skills or special abilities, a gimmick, or anything that makes it stand out as an athlete or fighter? If so, talk a little about it here. Be sure to include an explanation or origin story for anything unusual, extraordinary, or supernatural.
> Well, being an aquatic creature, she can swim fast and breathe underwater, but that's not really special..
One unusual talent she has though, is she is able to mimic a personality of someone's almost perfectly even if she has only been with them for a short while. She's always been able to.
Also, as her 'weapons' she can use the 'fins' on her elbows. They're abnormally sharp, so they work well for cutting things (like people).

Does your character have any purpose? (It's okay if you don't have this fully figured out yet, but all the better if your character does have an agenda or some sort of driving force to it to make it interact with other characters.)
> Like I've said, she's trying to write her book. So to get experience, she's trying to put herself in as many interesting situations at possible.

Does your character have an image? You can post it here, if so (as long as you follow the rules mentioned in the character guidelines). If not, please write a description of your character's appearance.
>Image

Will you be around to play your character regularly? (i.e. Keeping daily tabs on any threads you involve yourself in, and posting whenever it's your turn?)
> I'm usually online. So, yeah.

Do you live in or near the Americas, or elsewhere? (It may be difficult for you to participate in any of the fast-moving sessions if you're only online when the rest of the group is asleep, so we ask this just to be aware of any potential problems.)
> Canada, Ontario.

Are you okay with having your character information and image on this website (such as on the wiki)?
> Totally man, go for it!

What is your name? (This question isn't optional. We need something to call you by that isn't your character's name. Don't post your last name, though! This forum isn't private.)
> Elena. Again, it's a pleasure.


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 Post subject: Re: Avatar the Piranha/Dolphin
PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:24 pm 
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Alrighty! So this looks pretty good for the most part, but there are just a couple very minor things to address:

First: Carriage returns aren't needed after every or every other line of information; full paragraph form is preferred, and we can just sort this out Wiki-wise, so... just for future reference.

Second: The species doesn't quite sit well with all of us mod-folk-- this hybrid's awkward, is all. If you'd be okay with calling it a straight-up piranha, or even a shark such as you mentioned in the chat, the only other shark player in the roleplay is all cool with it-- we'll set it as 'piranha' on the wiki and you can change that about as you see fit.

Third, and this was addressed briefly in the chat: your art is rather disproportionate for Sonic style (she looks to be about six feet tall when compared and scaled with other art!). If need be, it can still be used for reference if linked (but not fully displayed) on the wiki, or, if you obtain more in-scale art at some point, that can be used as well.

Now, none of these things are deal-breakers, so if you're okay with all that, you can begin editing the wiki!

Avatar

Make sure to tell one of the mod team when you're done so we can give it a look-over and stamp it approved!



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 Post subject: Re: Avatar the Piranha/Dolphin
PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 7:40 pm 
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Awesome! If ya don't like the hybrid, just calling her a pihranna is cool with me. Also, I'll draw another pic of her if ya want. I'll see if I can draw a more .... SA styled girl character. ^.^


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 Post subject: Re: Avatar the Piranha/Dolphin
PostPosted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 8:31 pm 
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Here's the link to the discussion tab on your wiki article with approval notes, which is to say: approved. Have fun.


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