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| Author: | E1Alpha [ Sun Jul 01, 2012 11:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Vade the Coyote [abandoned] |
This character has been Approved! This character's wiki page may be viewed here. Everything below this point is just the member's application, and does not reflect the final profile! To see the full list of approved original characters with their completed profiles, please visit the original characters section of the wiki. ---- |
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| Author: | Admin [ Mon Jul 02, 2012 11:48 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Vade the Coyote |
There aren't really any problems here—the biggest one is the time zone thing, to be frank. But, what the heck, we'll give it a shot. I'm just sorry to say that if your involvement ends up slowing anything because of the time zone difference, however, you probably will be written out of threads. So, anyway, consider this approved for the wiki stage. There are a couple of things that didn't sit well, though. Quote: Other than that, Vade will sometimes use a rod with the ability to let loose of electrical discharges to defend himself. This random weapon is kind of out of the blue, given the rest of the character, and unclear in what it does. Is it a stun baton? Or do you intend it to actually fire lightning bolts like some sort of electrolaser? Since he's some sort of technophile, I guess it makes sense to have some sort of electric weapon, but you haven't yet described a character who has any reason to be a fighter, so it feels like an unrelated afterthought in light of the rest of the profile. Quote: On his chest, he has some gray-colored hair, in a V-shape. ... His gloves have a metal wristband, with a metal plate attached to it to cover the back of his hands. His shoes are similar to them, having a metal band around his ankle, as well a metal plate on the top of his shoes. As long as you do not intend the chest tuft to look like Shadow's, the glove plate to look like Fang's, or the shoe plate to look like Knuckles', otherwise the character image (if your art panhandling in the chat last night actually worked) won't be allowed on the wiki. Anyway, your character's wiki article has been started. (The part about the electro-rod thing has been omitted for now, but you can re-add it prior to approval if you flesh it out a bit more.) Vade You can use your forum username and password to log into the wiki and edit it. If you find anything confusing (especially regarding star ratings) don't hesitate to ask. Be sure to let someone know when you're done editing! Have a good one. |
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| Author: | E1Alpha [ Mon Jul 02, 2012 12:03 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Vade the Coyote |
Woops o.o I had intended to remove the part about the rod! Completely forgot to do so ^^' About the elements of his appearance, the fur is supposed to be much more a V-shape. If I have the right image in my head, Shadow had something more triangular. But in any case, I have no intention at all to steal their looks. If it turns out those elements bear too much resemblance to Knuckles, Fang and Shadow (or anyone else), I'll definatly change it up when desired! Anyways. Let's see what we can do with this wiki page! EDIT: I do have one question regarding the star ratings: Vade's top-spin increases his speed and such drastically. Do I need to use his skills with or without the top-spin for the star ratings? |
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| Author: | Admin [ Mon Jul 02, 2012 12:31 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Vade the Coyote |
Good question. I'd say the basic rule of thumb is that if it isn't a part of the character or isn't otherwise attached, it doesn't count toward the star ratings. So, let's go with the "without" option, but elsewhere in the profile (maybe the abilities section, or a trivia section about the spinning top, even, if you'd like) mention its speed. |
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| Author: | E1Alpha [ Tue Jul 03, 2012 7:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Vade the Coyote |
Alright, got a quick question to finish this one up: If my wiki page is checked and approved, I will still be able to edit it later to update it with a picture, if I alert the staff of this so they can give the picture their approval, correct? If the answer to that is yes, then I would say my wiki page is about done, safe for the picture, and ready to be checked. |
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| Author: | Admin [ Tue Jul 03, 2012 11:43 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Vade the Coyote |
You can actually update your profile as often as you like without too much worry here. Lots of folks make continuous little tweaks and changes as time goes on. The restrictions are really only on changing star ratings, adding abilities, adding anything completely off the wall (like suddenly deciding your character is an experimental genetic offshoot of Project Shadow or something equally ridiculous), etc... Anything that may be unfair or break the rules. You get the idea. But just changing phrasing, adding images, and all that kind of stuff can be done pretty freely. If a picture is put up that doesn't jive, it'll just be taken down or turned into a link, but I wouldn't worry too much about that sort of stuff. Anywho, one of us will take a look at your profile sometime tonight or tomorrow, most likely. |
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| Author: | Admin [ Wed Jul 04, 2012 12:08 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Vade the Coyote |
Stamped and approved. Welcome aboard. No changes were made (other than really minor and random stuff like typos and what have you, which were few). Hopefully, the RP will soon get somewhere more open once we're done discussing how we want to start the next thread. Expect a new thread on South Island to pop up sometime over the next day or two. |
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| Author: | E1Alpha [ Wed Jul 04, 2012 1:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Vade the Coyote |
Thank you ^^ I'll be waiting anxiously for a chance to join in on the RP. |
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