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Author:  Saphyre [ Sat Dec 17, 2011 5:51 pm ]
Post subject:  New Character

What is your character's name?
> Saphyre "Saph" Heart

Species?
> Tiger-Female

Age?
>17

Give us a couple paragraphs of general info about your character. For example, what's the character's personality like? What kind of things does he or she do? Why does he or she do it?
>Saph is a very lovable Tiger, she tends to pretty bold and walk up to anyone and start talking to them like shes known them for years but actually only known them for a few minutes. She is a great secret keeper and will promise to keep the secret till the grave. Saph likes to draw and write. She likes to do this because it keeps her closer to her deceased family (she is the only one left of her family)

Does your character have any skills or special abilities, a gimmick, or anything that makes it stand out as an athlete or fighter? If so, talk a little about it here. Be sure to include an explanation or origin story for anything truly extraordinary or supernatural.
> Saph is pretty acurate with a pair of daggers and throwing knives, but she isn't a perfect with them.

Does your character have any purpose? (It's okay if you don't have this fully figured out yet, but all the better if your character does have an agenda or some sort of driving force to it to make it interact with other characters.)
>trying to figure out how she is the only one that survived when a fire took her family's life.

Does your character have an image? You can post it here, if so (as long as you follow the rules mentioned in the character guidelines). If not, please write a description of your character's appearance.
>(I'm working on a pic as i type) Saph is a turquoise tiger with rainbow colored eyes ( the start at the pupil then go to violet, indgo, blue green, yellow,orange, and red). Her hair is teal that blue tipped. She wears a strapless tank-top that shows her belly button and flares out a bit. She wears denim shorts held up with a black belt. She has a pair of costom made fingerless gloves,they are dark blue leather with a purple stripe across the knuckles, and the pads of the palms are lighter blue.

Will you be around to play your character regularly? (i.e. Keeping daily tabs on any threads you involve yourself in, and posting whenever it's your turn?)
> i wil l try try my hardest to be on as often as posible

Do you live in or near the Americas, or elsewhere? (It may be difficult for you to participate in any of the fast-moving sessions if you're only online when the rest of the group is asleep. So, we ask this just to be aware of any potential problems.)
>i live in the Americas

Are you okay with having your character information and image on this website (such as on the wiki) for as long as you're an active member?
>yes i am perfectly fine with that

What is your name? (Don't post your last name! This forum isn't private!)
>Sydney

Author:  Admin [ Sat Dec 17, 2011 6:30 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: New Character

Hey, thanks for submitting. I think you need to take a little more time with this, though.

1. Making a character whose entire raison d'être centers on a dead family is just not a good idea for a Sonic RP, whether she is angsty about it or not. I would dare say that the majority of fancharacters people try to submit have families who died in mysterious accidents or attacks. None of them get accepted. It's extremely cliché. Could it be done well? Yes, sure. Is it ever? Almost never, and this is no exception. This brings me to the next point.

2. The character needs to be fleshed out and thought out more. The personality info is a few sentences that don't even form a cohesive paragraph, but instead just dryly recite some facts. Even with her abilities, one might ask why she fights with "daggers." Your specific choice to use the word "dagger" over "knife" suggests something archaic and odd to use in a modern/scifi RP. What does it have to do with who she is? What has driven her to be any kind of fighter at all, for that matter? See, I've already typed more in questions than was written about this entire character.

3. Very little discretion was used in the visual design, from the sound of it. Your character has the following colors: All of them. Seriously, though. There isn't a picture yet, but that may be for the better.



Your options, if you still want to RP, are: Polish, expand, and resubmit this profile; try the beginner member approach to joining; or check out another, simpler RP, such as Sonic Cyclone, where they have no beefs about angst backstories.

Author:  Saphyre [ Sat Dec 17, 2011 6:40 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: New Character

ok sorry i was multi-tasking and i will repolish this, i am normally very apt at creating charaters. >>

Author:  Saphyre [ Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:58 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: New Character

What is your character's name?
> Saphyre "Saph" Heart

Species?
> Tiger-Female

Age?
>17

Give us a couple paragraphs of general info about your character. For example, what's the character's personality like? What kind of things does he or she do? Why does he or she do it?
>When wanting to describe Saph, these words come to mind; quick witted, tenanatious, and full of energy. She has a likable factor about her that helps her get friends where ever she goes. She also is a super loyal to those that are her friends and is a expert sercret keeper. She will keep any secrets that have been told to her, even if it means she would die if she doesn’t tell them. But don’t go back stab her, she has a short fuse temper and anger management problems.
She has a very adventurous spirit and she tends to get caught in some hard prediciaments but always get out of them. She also knows when to stop from chasing after certain treasures and go after others.
Though one secret she refuses to share is that even with her likable qualities she is extremely shy around large groups of people. She freezes up, but tries her best to hide it. But don’t let that fool you, she has a habit to walk up to you (if you not surounded with a large group of people) and begin talking to you like she’s known you her whole life.

Does your character have any skills or special abilities, a gimmick, or anything that makes it stand out as an athlete or fighter? If so, talk a little about it here. Be sure to include an explanation or origin story for anything truly extraordinary or supernatural.
> Being of medium build and lanky muscling, Saph learned it best to use quick foot-steps and small, powerful kicks and punches to over come others bigger or stronger. It also helps that her tail gives her uncanny balance that allows her to perch and run on top thin railings, fences, roofs, and blaconies. She also is very apt at using a pair of daggers and throwing knives. which she has an almost acurate aim and wouldn’t trade them for the world, or any other weapon for that fact.
Does your character have any purpose? (It's okay if you don't have this fully figured out yet, but all the better if your character does have an agenda or some sort of driving force to it to make it interact with other characters.)
>She is a treasure hunter and adventurer, though it doesn’t hurt to make even more friends.
Does your character have an image? You can post it here, if so (as long as you follow the rules mentioned in the character guidelines). If not, please write a description of your character's appearance.
>picture is in Attachment

Will you be around to play your character regularly? (i.e. Keeping daily tabs on any threads you involve yourself in, and posting whenever it's your turn?)
> i wil l try try my hardest to be on as often as posible

Do you live in or near the Americas, or elsewhere? (It may be difficult for you to participate in any of the fast-moving sessions if you're only online when the rest of the group is asleep. So, we ask this just to be aware of any potential problems.)
>i live in the Americas, namely Arizona

Are you okay with having your character information and image on this website (such as on the wiki) for as long as you're an active member?
>yes i am perfectly fine with that

What is your name? (Don't post your last name! This forum isn't private!)
>Sydney

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Author:  Admin [ Wed Dec 21, 2011 1:11 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: New Character

Sure, let's give it a shot, shall we? Your character's wiki profile has been started with the info you provided here. You can use your forum username and password to log into the wiki and finish it up whenever you're ready. (The "edit" tab is at the top of the profile after logging in.)

Saph

Don't forget to check out the chat some evening and meet some folks, though! It can be hard (that is, nigh impossible) to get involved in this kind of RP if you never get to know anyone out-of-character.

Later!


EDIT: Player won't pay attention to rules to properly complete wiki profile. This isn't going to work out.

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