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Sonic Spindash RP is closed.

Founded 05/25/2002 by three friends; ended 09/19/2012.

It pains me to say this, but we're done. Thank you to those who have participated and followed along these many years. We had a lot of fun, and your contributions will be remembered for a long time to come.

Strangers and visitors of the future, please respect what is ours. If there is anything in the form of writing or rules you'd like to borrow for your own RP, please e-mail me on the gmail account "onsoku" for permission. Chances are I'll grant it if you are a nice, intelligent person, and agree to just a few small stipulations regarding proper crediting method. But please, leave our characters alone.All fan-made, original, non-SEGA characters, character art, and concepts remain property of their respective creators. Please show respect and don't try to take any of them for your own use.

I hope that some of us will be able to move on and have some more fun writing hobbies in the future. No matter what, we'll stay in touch, and this group will live on, even if it has nothing to do with RP.

I love you guys. God bless.

-M


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 Post subject: Character Entry
PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2011 1:02 pm 
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What is your character's name?
>Zane

Species?
>Hedgehog(I know, I know, Hedgehogs are overused :P )

Age?
>19

Give us a couple paragraphs of general info about your character. For example, what's the character's personality like? What kind of things does he or she do? Why does he or she do it?

>When he was young his parents were separated from his family, ever since we just wonders around with no purpose to think with his memories. He personality includes: Lonely, Angry, Sad, Regretful, And Doesn't care for others


Does your character have any skills or special abilities, a gimmick, or anything that makes it stand out as an athlete or fighter? If so, talk a little about it here.

>He has excellent ability in stealth so he say away from others and be alone, he also has undiscovered elemental power in the wind


Does your character have any purpose? (It's okay if you don't have this fully figured out yet, but all the better if your character does have an agenda or some sort of driving force to it to make it interact with other characters.)


>Is purpose is to find out were his family is, but after so many searching he has given up

Does your character have an image? You can post it here, if so (as long as you follow the rules mentioned in the character guidelines). If not, please write a description of your character's appearance.


>Zane is Red, With Orange Stripes, His hair style is messy but spiked in a wild way. His costume consists of a long black trench coat, Black fingerless gloves and Black shoes with red stripes. He has ruffled Orange fur on his chest. And has Red eyes

Will you be around to play your character regularly? (i.e. Keeping daily tabs on any threads you involve yourself in, and posting whenever it's your turn?)

>Should be around Fairly often

Do you live in or near the Americas, or elsewhere? (It may be difficult for you to participate in any of the fast-moving sessions if you're only online when the rest of the group is asleep. So, we ask this just to be aware of any potential problems.)

>In the UK but I always stay up late so shouldn't be a problem

Are you okay with having your character information and image on this website (such as on the wiki) for as long as you're an active member?
>Yes. That would be fine

What is your name? (Don't post your last name! This forum isn't private!)
>Brandon :P


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 Post subject: Re: Character Entry
PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2011 1:41 pm 
More like adMAN

Joined: Thu Oct 15, 2009 5:32 pm
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Hey, there! Thanks for your interest and all, but...

Quote:
Give us a couple paragraphs of general info about your character. For example, what's the character's personality like? What kind of things does he or she do? Why does he or she do it?

>When he was young his parents were separated from his family, ever since we just wonders around with no purpose to think with his memories. He personality includes: Lonely, Angry, Sad, Regretful, And Doesn't care for others

This isn't a couple paragraphs, dude. It's a sentence and a list of adjectives. Please, don't misunderstand me and think that everything is judged by length and wordiness—it really isn't. It's instead about thoughtfulness and creativity. That said, this character doesn't seem like it's had much thought put into it. Furthermore, there's no origin provided for him having some sort of latent elemental power.

In shortest and most brutally frank terms, what this sounds like is an emo airbender Sonic recolor.

No go.



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